Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Fireworks

After correction from native speaker
On Sunday, I went to see the fireworks at Hita City. It was cloudy but I thought it was less cloudy than Saturday. The festival was heldfor two days. We could see them closely from a launch mount. It was beautiful, gorgeous and big. We could come back from there easily without a trafic jam, because we left before the fireworks finished.

Original diary
On Sunday, I went to see fireworks at Hita city. It was cloudy but I thought it was less than Saturday. The festival was holded for two days. We could see them closely from a launch mount. It was beautiful, gorgeous and big. We could come back from there easily without trafic jam, because we quit to see just before that fireworks finished.

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